Author Services
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Interested in an outsider reader?
Your work deserves to be read carefully. If you’re ready for that next step, we’d love to hear from you.
What comes next?
Writing a manuscript is only part of the process.
At a certain point, writers need to know how their work is being experienced by someone encountering it for the first time—what is clear, what is compelling, and what may need refinement before sharing it more widely.
Ember & Ink provides a structured, reader-focused evaluation of your manuscript from a single qualified reader. The goal is to offer clear, honest feedback on how your story is landing on the page and provide content you may wish to use in promotion of your work.
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Full Manuscript Evaluation Report
A structured written assessment covering the complete manuscript, including:
Overall reading experience and engagement
Narrative clarity and coherence
Character development and emotional impact
Pacing and structural flow
Strengths of the manuscript as a whole
Areas of confusion or inconsistency
Reader interpretation of key story elements
2. “Six Units” Narrative Breakdown
A structured analysis of your manuscript through core storytelling components, including:
Plot and narrative progression
Character and motivation
Structure and form
Pacing and tension
Voice and style
Clarity and comprehension
Each section includes observations and notes from the reader’s perspective, highlighting how these elements function within the manuscript.
3. Reader Impression & Review Summary
A concise, publication-facing summary that reflects how a real reader experiences your work.
This includes:
Overall impression of the manuscript
Reader-facing description of the story
Key strengths in accessible language
Potential “blurb-style” phrasing you may draw from
General interpretive response to the work
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Submit Your Manuscript
You provide your manuscript in digital format for review.
Reader Evaluation
A single qualified reader reviews your manuscript in full and records structured feedback.
Written Report
You receive a comprehensive written evaluation in 3-4 weeks including:
Reader impression summary
Narrative clarity and engagement notes
Character and story response
Structural observations
Strengths and areas for refinement
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$299 per manuscript
Includes:
✓ Full manuscript read-through by one qualified reader
✓ Structured written feedback report
✓ Overall reader impression and response summary
✓ Clarity, pacing, and narrative engagement feedback
✓ Strengths and areas for refinement
✓ Reader-facing perspective on how the story is receivedPayment required at submission
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This is not proofreading, editing, or publishing support.
It is a structured reader evaluation designed to help you understand how your manuscript is experienced as a complete work.

