Revising
For writers with a completed or near-complete manuscript who want support refining and preparing it for submission or publication.
What’s Offered?
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Guided support for refining and completing a finished or near-finished manuscript
Writing a novel doesn’t end when the first draft is complete.
In many cases, the most difficult work begins afterward—refining structure, strengthening character arcs, resolving narrative issues, and shaping the manuscript into a cohesive final work.
This service provides sustained, one-to-one support for writers moving through the later stages of manuscript development. The focus is on helping you bring clarity, cohesion, and direction to an existing draft so it can move toward completion.
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$1,499 (6-month engagement)
Includes:
✓ Two private coaching sessions per month (12 total sessions)
✓ Online video or phone-based coaching
✓ Structured revision and manuscript development support
✓ In-depth feedback on narrative, structure, and character
✓ Ongoing guidance for revision decisions and story refinement
✓ Development materials, worksheets, and revision tools
✓ Support for preparing a manuscript for completion or submissionPayment plans available upon request.
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This service is designed for writers who:
Have a completed or near-complete manuscript
Are working through revision or structural challenges
Want support refining and strengthening their draft
Need help identifying what is working and what is not
Are preparing a manuscript for submission or publication
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Every revision engagement begins with a manuscript review and consultation.
This helps identify the current state of your draft and the key areas requiring refinement before revision work begins.
Revision support
Over the course of the engagement, sessions focus on strengthening and refining your manuscript.
This may include:
Evaluating structure and narrative coherence
Strengthening character arcs and development
Addressing pacing and flow issues
Identifying areas of confusion or weakness
Making informed revision decisions across the manuscript
The focus is on clarity, cohesion, and preparing the manuscript for completion.
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Long-term support for refining and completing your manuscript
✓ Twelve private coaching sessions over six months
✓ Online video or phone-based coaching
✓ In-depth feedback on your full manuscript
✓ Structural and narrative revision guidance
✓ Character, pacing, and clarity evaluation
✓ Support for strengthening and completing your draft
✓ Revision tools and development materials
✓ Ongoing direction for manuscript refinement decisions
Our Philosophy
A manuscript changes significantly between first draft and final form.
This stage of writing requires a different kind of attention—less about generating new material, and more about refining what already exists.
At Ember & Ink, we understand how challenging this phase can be. Writers often know something isn’t working but struggle to identify exactly what needs to change.
Revision Mentorship is designed to provide clarity during that process. The goal is to help writers see their manuscript more clearly, make confident decisions, and move steadily toward completion.

